Thursday, July 14, 2011


Unsure line
Lapping waves
Draw a line in the sand:
Here and no further.
Erased by the next tide
High tide
A tide in the affairs of man.
Time and tide wait for none.
A time for change
A change of mind.
Leaving on the new tide.
New journey
New horizons
New shores.


FFF55 is a weekly challenge set by the G-Man over at Mr Knowitall's blog. You know the score by now. Go and see everyone else's offerings!


Akelamalu said...

All change!

Great 55 AJ. x

Jarmara Falconer said...

WoW! Loving it, AJ... What a brilliant poem.

Brian Miller said...

ha nice play in the opening lines...this was fabulous...

Cad said...

I like where your lines wandered...

G-Man said...

They say the only thing inevitible, is change.
Loved your 55 AJ.
Brilliant as usual
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Olivia said...

Time and tide wait for none.
What a beautiful life song.. :)
drenched completely...

hugs xo

Eric 'Bubba' Alder said...

The tide always dares. Nice 55.

Margaret said...

Really nice. It is always there, but ever changing...

hedgewitch said...

Quite a journey. A sea change, perhaps? Enjoyed it.

snafu said...

A nice flow of words

hope said...

And that's the perfect shot to illustrate your winding words!

Jingle said...

divine lines,

the image you chose fit your words perfectly.

fantastic 55.

Ellie Garratt said...

Stunning. I loved the form you used. Perfect!

Ellie Garratt