“Stupid man,” thought Billy ‘the Dip’ Jackson. The bloke didn’t have a clue. He’d been the perfect mark – clearly a tourist and carrying cash in his back pocket. Billy counted out the notes until he came to the last sheet and read: “Enjoy your moment of gloating. They’re fakes. And I’ve now got your wallet.”
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55 words for the G-Man. Go and see what other people have produced over at Mr Knowitall's blog.
15 comments:
NOW I realises the full meaning of LOL - great one this and so clever!
Followed you over from Birdie's comment wall. Interesting stuff here. Glad I found you.
Reminds me of the occassion when I found my car with a new dent in it and a note on the windscreen. It read, 'A crowd of people have gathered around looking at the accident and they all think I am putting my name and address on this note....'
Ha...Their Just Desserts!!
Nice little Ake twist AJ
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
dolp...one good turn deserves another......hope he wasnt in line at the grocery after spending all that time shopping...that would be just my luck...lol
Karma is a B..... LOL
Great 55 :)
haha...this i call justice..smiles
He gets what he asked for..nice one ~
Happy weekend ~
Nice twist! Great 55.
Great twist! thanks-
Love it! You know I like a twist in a story. :)
Sweet justice :)
Great story in 55 words! The tables neatly turned.
ha! LOVE that. The old "Sting" action.
Hi Anne .. good story - fun tale .. one I could tell the oldies .. they'll laugh I think .. cheers Hilary
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