Friday, January 13, 2012

FFF55. Billy


“Stupid man,” thought Billy ‘the Dip’ Jackson. The bloke didn’t have a clue. He’d been the perfect mark – clearly a tourist and carrying cash in his back pocket. Billy counted out the notes until he came to the last sheet and read: “Enjoy your moment of gloating. They’re fakes. And I’ve now got your wallet.”

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55 words for the G-Man. Go and see what other people have produced over at Mr Knowitall's blog.

15 comments:

Sandra Davies said...

NOW I realises the full meaning of LOL - great one this and so clever!

Wrinkling Daily said...

Followed you over from Birdie's comment wall. Interesting stuff here. Glad I found you.

snafu said...

Reminds me of the occassion when I found my car with a new dent in it and a note on the windscreen. It read, 'A crowd of people have gathered around looking at the accident and they all think I am putting my name and address on this note....'

G-Man said...

Ha...Their Just Desserts!!
Nice little Ake twist AJ
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Brian Miller said...

dolp...one good turn deserves another......hope he wasnt in line at the grocery after spending all that time shopping...that would be just my luck...lol

Daydreamertoo said...

Karma is a B..... LOL
Great 55 :)

Claudia said...

haha...this i call justice..smiles

Grace said...

He gets what he asked for..nice one ~

Happy weekend ~

Mama Zen said...

Nice twist! Great 55.

izzy said...

Great twist! thanks-

Akelamalu said...

Love it! You know I like a twist in a story. :)

Raven said...

Sweet justice :)

Doctor FTSE said...

Great story in 55 words! The tables neatly turned.

Margaret said...

ha! LOVE that. The old "Sting" action.

Hilary Melton-Butcher said...

Hi Anne .. good story - fun tale .. one I could tell the oldies .. they'll laugh I think .. cheers Hilary