Sunday, June 19, 2011

Sunday 160. Last words

Switching on the lights, she saw the man standing across the room.  She pulled the trigger before he could speak. “I warned you,” were the last words he heard. 

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- short stories with exactly 160 characters.

4 comments:

Brian Miller said...

yikes...lots of tension in your 160...well played...

Monkey Man said...

When a restraining order doesn't do the trick. Great 160. Thanks so much for playing.

Jarmara Falconer said...

Wonderful! so many questions filled my head, I wanted to know more.

Olivia said...

SHOOOOT!!

Intense.....
hugs xx