Friday, July 27, 2012

The intruder. (FFF55)

There was something furtive in the way he moved through the house, edging carefully around furniture, stepping noiselessly. The woman was oblivious to his approach, peeling vegetables at the sink as he crept behind her. Then he made his move.
“Surprise! Happy birthday Darling,” he announced, as he produced a bouquet from behind his back.
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Hey, G-Man. TWO actual characters this week, AND a plot.
For everyone else - go see the G-Man to see what Friday 55 is all about.

9 comments:

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Very good. I was fearing the worst...

Anna :o]

Akelamalu said...

Now that's a NICE surprise! :)

Brian Miller said...

aww....very cool of him...to remember and put so much thought into it...smiles...

izzy said...

I love the about face of the mood!
thanks-

G-Man said...

Is this a true story?
Thanks for exceeding the rule requirements AJ...:-)
Loved your startling 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Melissa Bickel said...

This was fun to read and a bit suspenseful toboot. Great outcome though.

˙·٠•●❤Sh@KiR@ ❤●•٠·˙ said...

I was fearing the worst. What a lovely twist. Wonderful!Have you a blessed weekend!

hugs shakira

Mine is here

Jinksy said...

Flowers never fail...

snafu said...

Nice twist