Sunday, November 20, 2011

Sunday 160

Still dragging out the NaNo extracts!  It's for Monkey Man, as usual. And it's heavily edited from its original to make it 160 characters. But here you are:

Ted Mathews believed he was a big fish in a small pool. The fact that he was actually small fry did not detract from his inflated opinion of his own importance.

5 comments:

Sandra Davies said...

Might only be 160 characters but a powerful and effective distillation nevertheless.

Jarmara Falconer said...

You're a wonder with words!

Brian Miller said...

ha...better watch out or he'll end up on a plate with a side of chips...

Morning said...

well written story.
Happy Sunday.

G-Man said...

Pass the Tarter Sauce please...