Lines of Communication I've just discovered the Writer's Diet website and I've had five minutes of satisfying fun while I checked out whether my writing needs to take more care of itself.
I'm proud to say that my first sample (my current NaNo daily attempt - as written, no editing) said it was fit and trim overall, though my verbs could do with toning.
My second sample (an earlier NaNo daily input, which I've edited a bit) came out as lean. Completely lean!
My third sample (written by my boss, who's always trying to correct my writing) came out as needing toning, bordering on flabby.
I'm laughing my socks off.