There was something furtive in the way he moved through the house, edging carefully around furniture, stepping noiselessly. The woman was oblivious to his approach, peeling vegetables at the sink as he crept behind her. Then he made his move.
“Surprise! Happy birthday Darling,” he announced, as he produced a bouquet from behind his back.
“Surprise! Happy birthday Darling,” he announced, as he produced a bouquet from behind his back.
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Hey, G-Man. TWO actual characters this week, AND a plot.
For everyone else - go see the G-Man to see what Friday 55 is all about.
8 comments:
Very good. I was fearing the worst...
Anna :o]
Now that's a NICE surprise! :)
aww....very cool of him...to remember and put so much thought into it...smiles...
I love the about face of the mood!
thanks-
Is this a true story?
Thanks for exceeding the rule requirements AJ...:-)
Loved your startling 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
I was fearing the worst. What a lovely twist. Wonderful!Have you a blessed weekend!
hugs shakira
Mine is here
Flowers never fail...
Nice twist
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